Starcraft Review Differences

There are many differences of that between my Starcraft 2 review and that of the one that the one that we read in class. The review that the person made has a lot more interesting words and comparisons. His review has a lot of very well constructed transitions that help flow the paper into new concepts and ideas. The review that the person wrote is a lot more appealing to a general gaming audience. Some things that I would want to change for my next review is adding more game comparisons and references to different parts that happen in game. I would also like to add a lot more appealing and interesting words to captivate my audience. I want to add more transitional phrases to fluently transition into a new topic.